I think you did a great job in your first elevator pitch. One of the things that you did the best was appealing to your audience's emotion. By describing the natural disasters and the people affected by them, you were able to draw out guilt and empathy from the audience, which is key for your organization's success.
I think your idea is really noble and there is, and likely always will be, a very real need for assistance in Caribbean countries and states around the Gulf. Storms will never stop, especially as climate change continues to accelerate, so an organization that only exists to help is a very necessary thing. I thought you had a really good pitch and appealed to the emotional side of investors by talking about the devastating power of these storms and the extent of their damage.
Natasha,
ReplyDeleteI think you did a great job in your first elevator pitch. One of the things that you did the best was appealing to your audience's emotion. By describing the natural disasters and the people affected by them, you were able to draw out guilt and empathy from the audience, which is key for your organization's success.
Hey Natasha,
ReplyDeleteI think your idea is really noble and there is, and likely always will be, a very real need for assistance in Caribbean countries and states around the Gulf. Storms will never stop, especially as climate change continues to accelerate, so an organization that only exists to help is a very necessary thing. I thought you had a really good pitch and appealed to the emotional side of investors by talking about the devastating power of these storms and the extent of their damage.